If you knew

by victoria   Dec 15, 2005


Hey i know this peom isnt all that great but i jsut write ir and i need some people to give me advice about my peoms. i odnt know if im god or not so please tell hte truth and leave me a comment

if you knew that i still cried
would you still be here?
if you knew how much i tried
would you wipe away all my tears?

i gave you all my heart and soul
but you couldnt do the same
you took advantage and took control
and left me feeling nothing but shame

my heart belongs to you
but my mind is telling me no
i only wish you knew
so my heart could let it show

please just try and understand
that we are meant to be
i want to scream all over the land
that you are with me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Wow I like the first verse...it was really cute. Thanx for ur comments, but I c u havent written in a while, come on, everyday is a poem..think about it...5/5

    ::MELI::