Oh my gosh hunni... this poem is so sad and so full of pain. I hope that you're okay... I know how it feels, and its not fun at all. Things will get better though, I promise you. If you ever need someone to talk to I'm always here, alright? Great poem

OMG ur poem was amazin and sooo full of emotion, absolutely brilliant, completely sad and raw emotion, and pain but wonderfully expressed. I hope you find the strength and courage within yourself, to be happy agen and well done on such an amazing poem, you are extremely talented!!!
Bethan xx
PS thnk u so much 4 my comment!!!

This is really good..! :-)

Wow!! amazing.
and thanks for the comment =)

Hey this one is sad and i truly feel for u as i hv been thro same.

well all i can say is stay strong
nicely penned poem

all the best and take care
5/5

Yes end it if he falls don wait:)hell with cheaters. a good one

love

Daz so gud...xactly how i felt

I can totally relate!!
excellent poem!! 5/5!

thankssomuch for commenting on my poem!!!

I really like this one to good job on this poem to!!!