by Bill Turner Dec 16, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I can hear the wail of the call reverberating in my ears |
by charles
Your poem is to dissjointed it seems to hop around with out any mission .other than that i could have enjoyed it.although you have talent unfortunatly not in this work as much as in some of your other poems |
by Kim
Very very nice, finally someone who's work I'll enjoy reading! You're on my favs now my friend ^_^ Keep making things great! Kudos! |
by Nathan
It was tight bill. I liked the way you ended it, and the way you made the sea feel like. Like I was looking at it for the first time, like a kid or something |
by Ann Stareyes
Ohhh Bill....So touching and I'm just speechless...Your talent shines within your beautiful heart... |
by Angie
Very touching and emotional, yet so beautiful... |