Dreaming about death

by Am I Your Favourite Horse   Dec 16, 2005


Bleeding out all my pain
Dreaming about
The breath I'll never gain
Forsaking my life
To unforgivable death
Awaiting the time
I will forever rest
Red water I see
Taking the life from me
As I lay here
And remember
What I used to be

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  • 18 years ago

    by f0rSaKeN AngeL

    This poem reminds me of that feeling when you just lay down and realize that something's missing and you just don't know what it is.. That feeling of emptiness you know..

    Well, I hope everything is going alright for you. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow! This is great!! The flow is excelllent! And very powerful poem! keep writing! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Amazing! i loved it 5/5 xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... I'm impressed. This poem is so powerful and you expressed your emotions so well. I hope you're okay though... if not I'm here to talk to anytime. Keep writing, cause you're great at it

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I loved the flow and wording.
    5/5 none to less. take care xx:

    blaine *> : PainOfOne

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