by Am I Your Favourite Horse Dec 16, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Bleeding out all my pain |
This poem reminds me of that feeling when you just lay down and realize that something's missing and you just don't know what it is.. That feeling of emptiness you know.. |
Wow! This is great!! The flow is excelllent! And very powerful poem! keep writing! xx |
by xEmmax
Amazing! i loved it 5/5 xxxx |
by TinyDancer46
Wow... I'm impressed. This poem is so powerful and you expressed your emotions so well. I hope you're okay though... if not I'm here to talk to anytime. Keep writing, cause you're great at it |
by Solace
I loved the flow and wording. |