Comments : Nothing You Could Say

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    Great ending loved this one as well. Thanks for the comments on my work i'll put ya in my favs so i can check out your new stuff. Also 4 years isn't that long after awhile. But maybe something will happen and he'll get out early i did!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Depression Bard

    Wonderful poem. I gave it a 5. I basicly loved the entire thing. But, the end was particularly good. Keep up the good work.