The Frozen/Pollinated Chronology

by Aidyn   Dec 16, 2005


To know that none
That know that some
Are gone, and no one found...
I stand without
A thoughtful doubt
In a place bereft of sound...
The shadow lies
'Twixt earth and skies
A captured vapour cloud...
I can feel
My hand unreal
A caustic comfort shroud...
No place I see
No barren lea
To catch my frigid love...
But then I sigh
My arms held high
To receive naught of above...
The shadow wakes
The sonic shakes
The fabric gone to tatters...
This shadow finds
Parallel binds
The mirror harshly shatters...
And I destroy
What I employ
And life a sing-song dagger...
No harder I try
So there I lie
And get up, walk, and stagger...
The music stings
The choir sings
Notes I resist and falter...
But now I lie
I cannot die
On the sacrificial altar...
Though now I wait
For some, too late
The seconds, addictive pollen...
Fate's tree's seeds
Have paid no heed
To the cursed place I've fallen...

I'm sorry...it's time to advertise---

This is a part of my series, "The Fallen"

The other entries are:

The Misjudged
The Fragile
The Tormented/The Fugitive
The Resolute/Tormented's End
The Generous/Love's Curse

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  • 18 years ago

    by motley girl

    Ohhhh man.scary.amazing.i adored it.especially the stinging music line.only thing i would change...i think the 'that' in the second line is..i'm not sure if it's just me or what but it seems kinda confusing...just a note...

  • 18 years ago

    by Wip lost the Rhythm

    I don't know why but I really get e.e. Cummings from this baby

    The sound, the rhyme, rhythm. love it all it's good good good.

    keep playing with poems like this :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by erratic hippie

    This is one of the most aesthetically-pleasing pieces i've read from you -- it appeals to the ears especially, not only through the verses aluding to that eerie music but with its flow through the most original rhymes i've read in quite some time (and we get poems *everyday* in Lit class) ^_^ ...i bite my thumb at you, sir! you and those virtuoso talents of yours!

  • 18 years ago

    by AnJolina

    Thats a really good poem u sould check out some of mine kk thanx
    ~!ugly & unloved!~

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Bien! Brill hunny, I must admit you've out done your self, and a word of advice JOIN THE CLUB lol i dunno what to tell you hunny, its just..so you.. lol Love you!

    Jenn