by Aidyn Dec 16, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
To know that none |
by motley girl
Ohhhh man.scary.amazing.i adored it.especially the stinging music line.only thing i would change...i think the 'that' in the second line is..i'm not sure if it's just me or what but it seems kinda confusing...just a note... |
I don't know why but I really get e.e. Cummings from this baby |
This is one of the most aesthetically-pleasing pieces i've read from you -- it appeals to the ears especially, not only through the verses aluding to that eerie music but with its flow through the most original rhymes i've read in quite some time (and we get poems *everyday* in Lit class) ^_^ ...i bite my thumb at you, sir! you and those virtuoso talents of yours! |
by AnJolina
Thats a really good poem u sould check out some of mine kk thanx |
by Pure Silence
Bien! Brill hunny, I must admit you've out done your self, and a word of advice JOIN THE CLUB lol i dunno what to tell you hunny, its just..so you.. lol Love you! |