Its good! good job, cant wait to read more

Well done Aidyn,
Long yet wonderful, a well inspired piece Im sure, Is this the end to the never ending series? Thankyou very much for the comment my friend, and for spilling my secret... Just playing I'll see you soon

Je t'aime
D.A

Bien! Brill hunny, I must admit you've out done your self, and a word of advice JOIN THE CLUB lol i dunno what to tell you hunny, its just..so you.. lol Love you!

Jenn

Thats a really good poem u sould check out some of mine kk thanx
~!ugly & unloved!~

This is one of the most aesthetically-pleasing pieces i've read from you -- it appeals to the ears especially, not only through the verses aluding to that eerie music but with its flow through the most original rhymes i've read in quite some time (and we get poems *everyday* in Lit class) ^_^ ...i bite my thumb at you, sir! you and those virtuoso talents of yours!

I don't know why but I really get e.e. Cummings from this baby

The sound, the rhyme, rhythm. love it all it's good good good.

keep playing with poems like this :-)

Ohhhh man.scary.amazing.i adored it.especially the stinging music line.only thing i would change...i think the 'that' in the second line is..i'm not sure if it's just me or what but it seems kinda confusing...just a note...