by Ashley Dec 16, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A love i would never know. Is that you? Are you the love I would never know? The love that could not be, A love so true and pure it will make you feel like pure xtasy. |
You did great! you wrote this for me i just know it....lol.....no i wish i wrote it ....i like it alot.......i hope you the best in your next poem..... |
by Juls
I like it, but I think we could work on the setup of the poem a bit better to make it flow better. Other than that I enjoyed reading. |