Odium (1st Draft)

by patrick smith   Dec 16, 2005


--this is a poem i wrote a couple of months ago, ive got another copy, but that is on a school pc and im on holiday:( so this is all ive got for now--

my Blind Black Hatred
Shall Misery and Pain
sow
my Enemies will Suffer and Weep
and Plead for forgiveness at my feet.

the innocent shall not be spared

my incontrollable Wrath
and nor those
who try to block
my Hatreds path

my Hatred shall come to the Gate of my heart, and I shall welcome it with open arms
my Hatred shall consume
and my sacred Anger shall spawn
and on my humanity
It shall feed

till I am nothing but
a Passionate Disciple of Hatred once again
filled with nothing but a heart of Wretchedness
and then my Misery shall accumulate and overwhelm
and grow
till the Pressure is to much

and then it shall Detonate

and the blessed Shrapnel of my Sorrow shall inflict
Vengeance on all

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  • 18 years ago

    by britt

    That is so cool i almost cryed and i hope you keep your writing like that

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    Wow!!! moving poem. extremely descriptive, well done. One of my favourite poem i admire the fact you are unique.
    Rosie xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Paula

    Realli gd hunni

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    by .DrEaM*cOmE*tRuE.

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    keep it up!!
    xoxo..

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