Wow i love the description in it and i really felt the anger and hatred through that.
I like it 5/5
thanks for ur comments, they mean a lot xoxo

Hey i liked ths use 0f w0rds. l0t 0f em0tin n p0wer in this p0em. g0od j0b 0n it

thank u s0 much f0r the c0mments y0u left 0n my p0ems!! they meant s0o much t0 me!! =)
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

Awesome poem budd..!!!
very deep in thoughtt
keep it up!!
xoxo..

Realli gd hunni

Wow!!! moving poem. extremely descriptive, well done. One of my favourite poem i admire the fact you are unique.
Rosie xXx

That is so cool i almost cryed and i hope you keep your writing like that