I adore that ending...so beautiful..intense and moving.
I thought the opening was powerful, it really pulls you into the poem.
Flow was good throughout the poem.
The only thing I didn't like was all the caps.

I really liked this poem, the only thing I didnt like about it was the feeling that this person couldnt go on without finding someone to be with that kinda thing always bugs me (sorry must be the feminest in me). But I liked the title and I liked the use of metaphores. Nice job.