Midnight Gypsy

by mier   Dec 16, 2005


In the graveyard,
of mist and stone.
Lay the shadow card,
scar and blood and bone.

Dark vengeance,
rules the night.
Begins the persecution.
when the angels hide.

Whispers of the souls,
nowhere and everywhere.
A secret left untold,
an unamed grave left there.

Her voice like screams,
down the black sea.
Like the ghost in your dreams,
she's the midnight gypsy.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Powerful and dark, very effective from beginning to the end. I like everything about this poem- Your descriptions are very vivid and original, atmosphere that you created is waved with tones of deep darkness, flow of the whole piece is flawless...
    Greatly done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I think that I read this piece before, I also thought that I left comment but I guess I didn't, never mind, anyway incredible poem. I love every line this piece absolutely shows your great talent. Well done and keep up with excellent work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nyx

    (Whispers of the souls,
    nowhere and everywhere.
    A secret left untold),....oooo profound words...the sense of death ...excellente!

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    WOW! such strong imagry in your poem! Well done! 5/5, i wish i could give you more!
    Love Mel

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    So very awesome, cool poem, I love it very much, keep writing..

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