The imagery in this poem is really strong! it works really well!

Very strong poem. It was great! 5/5 definitely! =]

-- *Amber Faith.* ©

Creppy, kewl
i liked it
short but great
~HazE

So very awesome, cool poem, I love it very much, keep writing..

WOW! such strong imagry in your poem! Well done! 5/5, i wish i could give you more!
Love Mel

(Whispers of the souls,
nowhere and everywhere.
A secret left untold),....oooo profound words...the sense of death ...excellente!

I think that I read this piece before, I also thought that I left comment but I guess I didn't, never mind, anyway incredible poem. I love every line this piece absolutely shows your great talent. Well done and keep up with excellent work!

Powerful and dark, very effective from beginning to the end. I like everything about this poem- Your descriptions are very vivid and original, atmosphere that you created is waved with tones of deep darkness, flow of the whole piece is flawless...
Greatly done!