Struggle Within

by chavii   Dec 16, 2005


Every moment has become a struggle to live.
A far cry, but no consoling words to heal.....
Tears and a sheet of paper ,my only companions to be seen .
An unending war raging within, with death only will it cease !

--chavii--

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Sad but powerful words. thx a lot for commenting on my poem. it was kind of u . i wish u all the best ,from my side.

    kind Regards,
    wishes

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    So sad and so beautiful all at once. the depth of the emotions that run through the poem are really good.

    i do hope you are ok
    take good care
    love and luck
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Hi again
    sorry 2 say but i wont give any advice 2 u regarding this. but yeah v all hav d rite 2 express ourselves no matter they always differ. well this is life!
    good poem, keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Wow... finally something new... goodness, you are such a good writer... i simply love your work..
    This is exactly how i feel.. your poem was wonderful...

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Every struggle in life,teaches always something new...whether you are ready to learn it,is completely left to you...Life is a struggle,when you think it as a struggle...just get along side it,and anything is possible...
    Nice poem...take care and keep smiling always..

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