I love it....light and humurous....but fully capturing the night from a childs perspective. Great write!

This so reminds me of my childhood,except for I was never brave enough to put a foot out of bed for fear of it being grabbed...Good Write ...I can relate to the fear...

Great one...that's really unique and creative 5/5 ^_^ thanks for sharing. You're really amazing :-)

Oh man, does this bring back memories, not only for me but for my kids as well....... its scary, but in a funny way.... awesome job.....

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

I was always afraid of a monster under my bed. Until I got a bed, with no under part :) Ever since I've been ok!

Very creative poem, and a great topic.

I think if I was 6 years old this actually would scare me! now it just makes me smile, well done, very clever

Very very good! Love your creativity! Fantastic write!