I love this poem. i neva read somthing so gr8!! thanks. keep up da work.

Try To Keep A Constant Rhyming Patern.. But Apart From That It's Realy Good and Filled With Love.

I Love This Poem.. Your Poems Seem To Get Better And Better Keep It Up.

I like the whole ''i feel'' thing....good job very sexy my friend.

Good poem!! I really like the last two lines of your poem.
peace