It's very sweet!! Very nice flow!!! The ending was great!! Great job, keep writing!! And thanks for my comment!!

Great poem...you have lots of talent. 5/5 Keep it up and thank you so much for your sweet comment on mine. Take care.

Lovely Poem very well versed, indeed you have lots of talent. Keep it up, hope to read more soon 5/5 for this great poem & thanks for commenting on mine!

Take care!

How the hell i never read this one...damn did i went blind or something??
this is so amazing

Looking back, I see the road
I find myself in no where
I see loneliness ahead of me and emptiness behind
With tears in my eyes I realize
Your love is the only thing worth life and death
And I will always love you till my final breath

wow....this is just so excellent...mind blowing.
kya khane ke baad likhte ho...lol

take care and all the best