by Bobbi Dec 16, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I love you with all my heart |
by Letty
This one is nice, but like you said it needs a little more work . Don't get me wrong, I love it . But you should add some punctuation points to help the reader follow it better . But over-all the poem was really good . Keep up the good work . |
by **Stacy**
I really like this, continue it, its really good |