The pure emotion of this is so overwhelming!I'm quite impressed.Outside of a couple grammer errors it is written well.But it is the honesty and heartfelt emotion that leaves an ache in the reader's chest.Love can be so sad, so painful.Like my own poems, it seems your best work is of love and loss.You express these emotions so well.I'm sure many can relate to this.I love the title.

LAYLA! Are you okay??? :'( it's so sad that i wish i could just hug you... so did u celebrate Xmas?? :] ill have to read ur other poems to understand what happened in this one, but its so sweet :) tear is one of my favorite words. its comforting just to cry...

Wow. Wow. Amazing! This is just another poem that you wrote so beautiful. I can feel the pain and the emotions that are put in this poem. It's so powerful. And so sad. And once again you described it so beautiful. I'm so impressed. Wow.. You are talented.. I know that for sure now!

Lotsaaa love!
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Keep up the good work!