Wow..That is very good! I have just read all of your poems and I am now going through to vote on some! I have to say, you are a very good writer! 5/5

Wow this is good!!

Ahhh, if everyone had an older brother like that...there'd be less suicidal people out there, maybe....GRETA JOB, love the rhyming

Aww that's so sad it making me cry im sry but it very sad