Wow u r feeling guilty...u kinda want to tell her what is up with ya'll two...but u don't want to lose him...i understand...well this deserves a 5/5 and thats what i gave you...stay strong...5/5 mami
love always
PrEcIoSa

The poems good!! just don't see how you could do that when you were in that place!! i mean yeah you like him alot but wouldnt' you rather have him to yourself?? u should just be honest! keep writng your good at it!

Wow! This is really good! I used to be the other girl all the time, but to me it was like a game. Now I feel like I'm getting pay backs. But I liked this poem because I could relate to both sides of it. You are so talented! I finally wrote something about what went on with my ex, it's called "I must be" it's not very good but it helped to write. You should check it out and let me know what you think k. It was so hard for me to finally be able to write about this and I still don't know why. I think I didn't want to feel.

It is a good poem but I have been recently cheated on so to hear you say those things makes me hate those other girls even more.

Ohhh hun, don't feel bad. Trust me. Even if it feels wrong, just remember that he's the one with the girlfriend, and he's the one cheating. You guys can't help the way you feel for eachother. But if ever you need advice or anything about this, I'm always here k?! :) great poem!

It's always better having what someone else has, right???
if ur heart is saying keep it up with him then keep it up. just go with ur gut. but really try not to hurt the other girl, she don't deserve it.
5/5. keep up the good work.

WOW..I really liked it..and I kinda know what u mean when u say u truly do care about her feelings, but having him seems more important...keep it up.

Wow!! that was great.. i know how it feels to be cheated on and its not great, but i also know how it feels to be the other girl. so i feel your pain. awsome job!!! cant wait till part 2
~lilia~

Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!