Wow.... this is so sad..... but it's still amazing!

I really like this poem. You did an awesome job on it. Keep it up!
~SMILES~

Hi babe if this is you i love your poem n i love you xx xx

If you stuck to a certain order in your form it would perhaps be more powerful but man this was cool. Really a great job. A few iffy words but still this was cool. An excellent concept. Some nice word play. The ending was great.
~Faith-less