Wow avellana...you never stop amazing me. great poem really...i can totally relate. i hope you start feeling better !! i love you! you are an excellent writer!!

Wow "But when you just got up and left
I was raped with reality" Those two lines are so true in my life right now and the word usage wow "raped with reality" thats awesomeee hun i cant believe how expressive that one line is, this is awesome great work my dear once again

This is me. Staring at my screen. And I just can't. I can't say anything. But I want you to know I've seen it. So here I am. And there I go.

This is beautiful. and i love how this line is shockingly effective: "I was raped with reality"

the last line puts a totally different feel over the poem, anger instead of depression. amazing.
stef/xx

Omg...
how do u manage to make me speachless everytime i read a poem of urs?
..wow xoxo

Oh my gosh. you've sent shivers down my spine and made me cry. I honestly cannot remember the last time a poem has touched me so much. It was BRILLIANT!! well done xoxo

"I'm watching the world through a filter
Blocks out unmanageable grief
Keeps out my fears and the darkness
... Or was it what keeps them in?"
Absolutely breathtaking lines.
I know i have already commented but i couldnt help myself:S
Brilliant hun..just amazing.

I would be so happy if ud join the fishbowl:) pretty please!!
Much love
xoxox