I Died..

by Torn   Dec 16, 2005


I broke,
You didn't care.
I fell,
You weren't there.
I cried,
You looked away.
I pleaded,
You said I was OK,
I bled,
You let it seeper.
I burnt,
You burnt me deeper.
I died,
You smiled.
You asked,
I said it wasn't worthwhile.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Guilty By Design

    I like this

  • 18 years ago

    by bella

    That was really interesting and different i really enjoyed it

  • 18 years ago

    by Pruedence

    Yeah it was ok

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Sin

    I`m surprised how many votes it got. Don`t take it personal.

  • 18 years ago

    by TearsLeftUndried

    Good poem!

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