Where r u?

by Passionate   Dec 17, 2005


I looked for you for hours, then realized you'd stood me up, and then i saw it was me i shouldn't trust. without you there your lover had no one to love.

*each line you have to look at to understand the meaning, read my poems & comment about this if you don't get it, and ill respond.*

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  • 18 years ago

    by ash

    Sarah!I love it!and yes i'll rate too!twidget midget!ok,read my latest "you" and yes it's about my b/f. tell me if I should give it to him for half a christmas present,and comment on it and some others i'm putting on there.love ya!!

  • 18 years ago

    by KaYkAy

    What excatly are you sayin in this? just to see if i got it right... comment my work to plz... i really liked the last sentence, if im takin it the right way...

    kaykay