So true so true, i know how it is i havea poem alot like it, its called Dearest Friend you might like to read it just cuz its similar.i really do like your poems cuz i can relate to them alot, you can prolyl relate to mine too , you should maybe comment more of mine and we can kepp commenting back and forth :)

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Poems don't have to rhyme I find this very good, also liked the idea that the "sweet" release wasnt what it first sounded like.

Hey, this was amazing! i have similar poems, called 'a deadly friendship' and 'hurting me'. i can relate to ur poems well.
be strong hun,
lots of luv
xxEmmaxxx

It is refreshing to see a piece where there is no forced rhyming. I feel it makes the words have more meaning.

Keep writing
Nici

Such a sad poem!! but how i love them!! haha well i love this poem it was very good!! and it didnt rhyme much...which really made it even better somehow....great job 5/5

Wow! i can rel;ate to this poem sooo much. it is really good. keep it up! LOVE JESS xxx

This 1 was easy 4 me 2 understand, and i luv it...gr8 work again! 5/5

~*Who Cares?*~

I like it.