My two friends and i

by The heart the soul the love   Dec 17, 2005


I've been living a depressed life
my only two friends are a razor blade and butcher knife
sitting in a corner looking at my only two friends not saying a word they told me everything i wanted to hear
these objects were always there
my only two friends they don't show any facial expression nor criticize me
there always where i want them to be
when none was really there they told me ever thing i wanted to hear
one slice of the wrist as you can see
i always hold my friends close to me
close to my wrist as i watch the blood flow
i have no one to lean on no place to go
people always say I've lost my mind
but in return i say it's the cure i find
my two friends have watch me laugh cry
watched me bleed and die
my two friend and i
have watched me die

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem, yuo've written it in a very effective way

  • 18 years ago

    by Fishie33

    I feel you i used to be a cutter but i stopped because of the love i recieved from my closest friendsand they made me realize that i mean i lot to them.....if you have frineds that care about you as much for you to stop cutting do it because thats the best way to stop yourself from kiling yourself slowly

  • 18 years ago

    by hanna

    I love how deep it is. it shows a LOT of feeling an pain.
    its really good!

  • 18 years ago

    by APoeticLetdown

    Hm, this one is very dark and depressing, but it's good. Personification seems to always work in these types of poems and you got that down. I don't want to applaud cutting, but I will applaud this poem.