Hm, this one is very dark and depressing, but it's good. Personification seems to always work in these types of poems and you got that down. I don't want to applaud cutting, but I will applaud this poem. |
by hanna
I love how deep it is. it shows a LOT of feeling an pain. |
by Fishie33
I feel you i used to be a cutter but i stopped because of the love i recieved from my closest friendsand they made me realize that i mean i lot to them.....if you have frineds that care about you as much for you to stop cutting do it because thats the best way to stop yourself from kiling yourself slowly |
Great poem, yuo've written it in a very effective way |