by ~Fallen Angel~ Dec 17, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Nine years old |
Great poem! Thef low is flawless and I love the format-Each line is short and it makes the poem easy to read. I love the end when you wrote how you dont choose life-life chooses you. So True! Amazing write---Keep it up! 5/5 |
Very good, reminds me of myself a lil. |
by stlzhunii420
Its true its not as if you wont this life its something your expected to do an have to do to stay a live, life aint free in the ghetto you have to show them what you want to be..... |
by stlzhunii420
Its true its not as if you wont this life its something your expected to do an have to do to stay a live, life aint free in the ghetto you have to show them what you want to be..... |
by Richard
Hmm kinda sounds like a rap song? |