One Year

by JessicaaSlater   Dec 17, 2005


One year of sadness,
One year of pain,
One year of hurt,
I can't explain.

The months have past,
And so has time.
My plan has failed,
Your still not mine.

Your the only one,
i feel this with.
But you know,
i don't see why.

Cause your the only one,
that doesn't care.
The one,
whom makes me cry.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    At the beginning, the flow was perfect, and the rhymes were good... but I noticed that on the last two stanzas you lost the rhythm a little bit... The emotion was still there.. it was just a little jumpy... I suggest fixing it up a little so that it flows more gracefully... Other than that, I really liked it 4/5 overall... Good poem! Keep writing and never give up! You have great potential!

    ~BJ~

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