Confused

by Letty   Dec 17, 2005


Slowly waiting anticipating for what ?
I don't know . Hearts racing mind
is fading into a world of its own .

Time is slowly ticking by, but its
truly robbing me of my life .
As I watch everyone succeed
I cry, because I've
been left behind .

Only bad times are left for me and
all good times are like distant
memories . I need someone that
can see . What the cruel society
has done to me .

I no longer feel human
I'm a lost soul.
Trapped and confined in
misery left with a broken
heart thats not beating and
a story thats old .

All the people around me make me
feel like a fool . They leave me
lonely, sad, used and abused . But
since I can't get things right enough,
I don't know what to do .

So I just take all the misery,
the sadness, the cruelty, and the days
of abuse, and call myself confused .

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Mazing i loved it. this rhythm workerd perfectly in this poem, i oved it, i love how the breaks make it seem like your taking breaths whilst writing it, like you're fuming, i have nothing bad to say, i dont know why its not a 5. .. hrmm. Great Work. =]

    i could totally relate. =]

    x.x:Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Lol jenn^^^
    haha..great work Letty=P
    very emotional..and saddening.
    I hope you are ok.
    Much love hun,
    >torn -x.x.x-

  • 18 years ago

    by Reagan Lausche

    I just re-read this poem because I loved it so much the first time, you are SUCH a good writer, this is sometimes how I feel as well, it's really deep, you express yourself well, Good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Reagan Lausche

    Wow, this is an amazing poem! It's very touching, keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Expressive poem Letty dear, Well done, Ive been commenting on poems all day and Im running out of ways to say well done so : Tres Bien -I have to switch languages lol- keep it up Much love

    Jenn
    5/5

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