Great job, this poem is simply amazing

5/5 lovin it thanks for the comment i loved it sound kina of like two diffrent poems of mine called Soul and, The sky pass by love the comment you left me hope you can read more of my poems and vote thanks i will do the same-Liz

Captivating and it was so well written it made me feel all the sadness and emotion! LOVED IT! Mwah welcome to my favs!

I totally felt exactly what you were writing great work

YOUR WRONG! YOUR NOT LOSTSOUL I AM. lol, anyways this poem is such a good poem, and it is so emotional that I felt like it was I who was writing the poem and not reading it.

Wow... I loved this. I love how you got it all down and made it all go together, and I can deffinatley relate. You've got some talent, thats for sure!

Super poem. your a brilliant writter.

Love it... one of your best.

Expressive poem Letty dear, Well done, Ive been commenting on poems all day and Im running out of ways to say well done so : Tres Bien -I have to switch languages lol- keep it up Much love

Jenn
5/5

Wow, this is an amazing poem! It's very touching, keep it up! 5/5

I just re-read this poem because I loved it so much the first time, you are SUCH a good writer, this is sometimes how I feel as well, it's really deep, you express yourself well, Good job

Lol jenn^^^
haha..great work Letty=P
very emotional..and saddening.
I hope you are ok.
Much love hun,
>torn -x.x.x-

Mazing i loved it. this rhythm workerd perfectly in this poem, i oved it, i love how the breaks make it seem like your taking breaths whilst writing it, like you're fuming, i have nothing bad to say, i dont know why its not a 5. .. hrmm. Great Work. =]

i could totally relate. =]

x.x:Lauren