Another great write! you seem to have the poem writen so simple but the emotions it just grabs the reader no matter what. i've read it about four times and it still has the same strong effect on me once i finish it. great job!

~Jacklyn

Beautifully written. Great job!

JJ!! OMG! This poem is amazing! I loved every line, how you put it together and the title was just wow!!! No suggestions here please leave it the way it is! Your an excellent writer!!
~Chels~

Excellent!

Short and sweet, The way I like them
Haha,Keep writing!

JJ,

I don't know what kind suggestions you
are for...You wrote it well.....

Shelby

Great poem 5/5 ^_^ keep it up.

JJ ,
No suggestions needed on this write ...
I think it is just flawlessly perfect as it is ...
Perfection !!!!!

JJ,
Thank you for your sweet comment on my poem...I truly appreciated your support.

Great job. I found it to be the normal low self esteem a lot of girls get, when they are actually something beautiful. And the title was appealing.

I like the intriguing way you wrote this. It's a very deep piece that leaves alot to perception.
I also admire the ending, very wise! Keep it up~Holly

Heyy I'm dory. I love your poems. God family friends sports and poentry are my life too. I like all your hobbies also. Great job. im only 13...and my poems pretty much stink. But please check em out :-)

I'm not a big fan of Sad poetry, but this one was very well written.

Good job!

JJ,

I'm sorry that I can't really critique on a write that I already find flawless and perfect in flow. Well done!

Warmest regards,

Steve

There's a very different symmetry to your poetry. one that makes me come back, read them again!
good luck and keep writing

shobhana