Wow, I am so sorry. It sounds like life hasn't been so nice so far...well I hope that you keep your head up, things will get better.

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

p.s thanks for commenting on my poem

Hey. Awww how sad:(. That's so emotional. I hope things are getting better for you..

Great poem
I can understand every word, but obviously not as well as you do
Excellent poem

Thanks for the comments :)

I'm sorry about your problems and wish you the best in your future.

-Taylor

Awww thts so sad :( but rly deep so its gd.
b strong, it wot ur mum wud want.
x Rach x chek my poems out if u want lol

That's really sad! I am sorry! Hope things get better!

I think anyone who rates this poems under a 5, ever, should be shot!!! This is great! I still have my mother, but not my real father. Never really knew him. But anyways. I love this poem and you will see her one day. When God allows, I bet she'll be the first one to greet you in Heaven. Good luck with you're poetry. ^__^

I like it. its very nice. good job.

Hey Usher!! That was so pretty but sad I hope that you know that life is never assured but I wished you had not gone through so much pain. Keep it up!!!

0mg darl!! that was s0 em0ti0nal. man such a sad and t0uching piece. im s0rry f0r the l0ss 0f ur m0ther. and ur father - i cant imagine wht things w0uld b like. g0od j0b expressing ur feelings darl. im here if u eva need t0 talk. g0od j0b 0n the p0em!
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra