~*OMG sweetie if thats true im soooo srry, but it was very beautiful work and i loved it, 5/5 keep it up ur a great writer and take care*~ XoXo

Wow... great write! i really liked this poem it was amazing... but i truley hope this is not a true story... good job writing this! keep it up!

sammie

The rhythm and flow is great! I award u 5/5! =) Check out my poems if u want.

I loved the poem, But I thought the ending was weak. Dont take that offensively! I dont know... I love it though...