To just disappear?

by Mark   Dec 17, 2005


A friendship stays long
For all of two years
Gets weaker and weaker
Until it disappears

Why is it like this?
I don't understand
I've tried to change it
But its not I'm my hands

If something so strong
Something lived long

Can vanish in an instance
Into the distance

What of the people?
That we hold dear
So close now
To just disappear?

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  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is a really good poem.. short and simple but still strong.. awesome job keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Real nice poem :) x

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Heys.
    I know whats it like & this poem really cathes it!
    Well done, very sad, emotional&good.
    I loved it.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I really enjoyed readin this one.
    you did a great job on it. the rhyme
    was good and I especially liked
    the beginning. good job mark.
    keep writing.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Hey mark, thank you for commenting on my poem ;o)... yours was great, i really liked it. Keep it up m8!

    Linds x

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