Comments : To just disappear?

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    Awww hunn
    i love it and its so true...but im not going anywhere,i love this poem

    love andrea xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Awesome (as always)! glad to read some new poems from you. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Wow....that's sad:'( But I love it Keep posting....I love it:)

    Love you lots
    Ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    Hey I like this! You have a great work here.... im not joking it is pretty true. We are always changing... who we held so dearly yesterday is who we are struggling to remember today. It is sad... and diffucult to think of all those who you love soon just disappearing. Thank you for the comment... and the poem is true... but i try SO very hard to stop and i really do avoid it... but im not a miracle worker
    love
    Kat

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    "What of the people?
    That we hold dear
    So close now
    To just disappear?"

    ^I've come to the conclusion that is a part of life, friends come and go like the leaves in the fall, but only true friends leave footprints in our hearts. we grow up, we move on..but the memories are always there....awesome write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Hey mark, thank you for commenting on my poem ;o)... yours was great, i really liked it. Keep it up m8!

    Linds x

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I really enjoyed readin this one.
    you did a great job on it. the rhyme
    was good and I especially liked
    the beginning. good job mark.
    keep writing.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Heys.
    I know whats it like & this poem really cathes it!
    Well done, very sad, emotional&good.
    I loved it.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Real nice poem :) x

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is a really good poem.. short and simple but still strong.. awesome job keep up the good work!