Good poem..

if you have a chance check out mine...

thanks

This a wonderful ballet of words Katie, and so graceful.

Well done~

Haunting in its imagery and sad in its prose...what a wonderful write my friend. Hang in there....you and your poetry touch us all.

Great write, it's extremely different and refreshing. keep up the excelent work! it was a great and intresting read.

~Jacklyn

I agree with Bill. The imagery is very dark and eerie. Sends shivers down my spine. The power of words. Very good poem!