Comments : Just another day. . .

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h hun g0od j0b expressing urself. very well written. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. very well written. keep it up. t0uching lines

    thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk! it meant s0o much t0 me! =)
    l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Jo

    Great poem..u really did a good job on this one!..ur hard work showz thru...well, i'm here if ya wanna talk..i mite not be able to help none, but i could at least show that i care :)..well, TAKE CARE!! :) xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Once again i am impressed by your writing and consider it to be one of the best i have ever written! this was so sad and emotional and just wow... i loved it! you have definetly earned a place on my favorites list! keep it up!!

    sammie

  • I can c that u worked hard...cuz its amazing..keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    It was a good poem, but personally not your best. up to this verse which was great

    *Love is a meaningless word
    At least it is to me
    But its hard to know the meaning
    When hate is all I see*

    it was a little choppy but after the verses flowed so amazingly well! Good write though!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Yeah i have to agree ^^^^

    i liked it but it wasnt your best.. it was still really good though..

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Well I think that this poem was really gr8t and your hard work paid off big time! I loved it to the end! It was an awesome pome seriously! ^_^