As a Child

Wow, was that ever sad, your a really great poet, i like how you can put part of your life in poems, and make sound so good, lol i cant do that!!

-stephanie 5/5!

"For I was only a child
Didn't know I should have told mom"
Oh, how I agree. Terrible feeling, isn't it? Lovely poem, though, uncomplicated yet expressive.

I'm off to read the other three too.

Wonderfully emotive. I liked the simple sad flow this poem had.

Now, too scared to tell
What would everyone say
Once they knew that as a child
He had a game he liked to play

These lines I found particularly haunting. Great job.

Wow... powerfull and sad... nice work.... so sorry about what happend... was with a girl who went through that : (

U have me in tears, U are so young & have to experience thing like that. The world is just so cruel & guys like that should be burn alive.