This is a real good poem 5/5 : )

Omg.. I'm so sorry.. thats horrible..... hang in there please.. amazing poem..but so sad... 5/5...

Wow... that was a great expression of what u have been through... i understand the pain and what u have went through... and i apologize from the bottom of my heart for it...

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kaykay

OMG!!! is this true?! you need to tell!!!!!!

The poems reflectt a sad and trgic story very well 5

Great poem, its written very well. i'm sorry for what happened, hope you'll be ok

Wonderful job, this poem is so sad and has so much emotion put into it.

I relate, thats all I'm saying.... 5/5

Well described and worded, a small confilict with the last two lines, however, that could be a matter of me not knowing the context. In short, very well done.

This is an exelent poem!! Sad, but it flowed nicely!! Good Job!!

Well done, this is the best poem that I have read in a long time and you certainly deserve a 5/5. I really do feel for you and I can relate - I was raped (by a teacher that I see everyday) about half a year ago and never told anyone. Non of my family or friends understand but I am so scared to tell them because of what he might do. If you EVER want to talk then I am here for you, feel free to let yourself go.
Excellent writing :)
Keep it up

Love Amy xxx

Hey, seems like you have trouble coping with problems. If you need to talk to someone, I am here for you. Just send me a private message, and I will be glad to help. You aren't alone.

Wow...that was really deep. it must have been hard to write about something like that. im really sorry.
5/5

Wow i don't know how it feels to be in your shoes...but i bet u feel like ..well i don't know but wow...i'm speechless...ur life is just so sad...i wish that i can c u happy...5/5

I have been there, and im still going through that...i no how you feel, i want too tell someone but cant

That is so sad
it's horrible how someone has put you through so much pain

It sound very real. I think its excellent

Omg...this is a great poem...it reali came from the heart.. keep up the excellent wrk !!!
-Zoya muahz

Oh darling this made me cry... You are agreat writer. I can tell you are mature for your age. BUt concerning your question about dating that 17 year old. I would say hold off on it. YOu seem to need a friend in your life more then you need a partner. Please id you ever need to talk, email me, I'll gladly listen.

Wow, im really sorry if that is a true story, but it was also a very good poem. well done. and again if that happend to u or a friend im like really sorry!!

--Allie