Really, Dory, that's your best poem yet. Awesome.

Of course, I contributed two lines in the openeing stanza...?

Hey, what can you expect from class with Mr. Arsenault?

Haha...

Awesome. Full points.

Matt

Hey Dory--double comment--can you take my last name out of your profile? Please. Thanks. Call Me Matt Chunkymuffinhead instead.

Matt

Its always sad to have love end this way and thinking about what could have been, it tears you up inside. especially when you know you've been used... good job

btw, you have far more talent then you think... keep writing!

Hey, this is good, I love it, I'm glad Matt get you into writing poems, you have the talent...