Unfortunately i know exactly what you mean, this poem is really good it has a nice simple flow

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

I like the metaphors in this poem which convey the true feelings of sad memories
great job I enjoyed the poem very much do not be offended by my lack of criticism

Ahhh! I can relate! I've written a poem like this before. Good job though.

It sounds like one of those dreams, I can't really explain.... Um the ones where your not quite sure what going on.

Ok I did that really badly but I hope you know what I mean....

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Pretty well-said. The poem has a nice and simple flow, yet it leaves a strong impression.

I really liked this poem and could really relate to it...Great jod. You have a real talent..Thanks for the comment I always return the favor =)

...so sad but so unbelievably breath-taking. loved it.