by Samantha Dec 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
He hits her sometimes |
Brilliant peice, great flow and comntent |
by Sherry Lynn
Overall, very good. I would try not to start a line with words like.. the, and, or, but ... to me it seems as though these little words interrupt the flow, but that is just my opinion. |
by Lucy D1am0nd
Omg this poem is so much like whats going on in my life right now and has been for the last ten years. Thank you for knowing exactly how it is. |