Omg this poem is so much like whats going on in my life right now and has been for the last ten years. Thank you for knowing exactly how it is.

Overall, very good. I would try not to start a line with words like.. the, and, or, but ... to me it seems as though these little words interrupt the flow, but that is just my opinion.

Overall, good job. Though it is a sad poem it is a message that needs to be heard by many.

--Sher

Brilliant peice, great flow and comntent