Comments : Untitled (Title ideas please?)

  • 18 years ago

    by *~*Crazy Gurl *~*

    I think u should call it unforgetful pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Wip lost the Rhythm

    I get the feeling this poem isn't just about suicide and death but so much more that it's even about life

    hardships
    hurt
    love
    lost love
    brokenness
    pain
    feeligs
    and alot of other things
    wrapped up into to something very simple

    the few words get the meaning across very good

    nice Rhyme Rythem and style good job

  • 18 years ago

    by ANNA

    I liked it it made me think

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    OMG! This is really good...for the title you should go for one of the lines in your poem like
    Forever you reside
    But if you don't like it that kool. :) 5/5

    Mallori

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    You could call it my hero my hell
    i dont know just a segustion
    love liz

  • 18 years ago

    by Becca1111

    Wow...i...wow...lots of emotion...5/5 w/o a dought..i cant think of a title that would fit this...i think its fine the way it is...it leaves a little curiosity to it.

    much love,
    becca

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Wilted roses maybe?? I dont know sounds good to me. Great poem you show a lot of emotion and im proud to have you as one of my favs.
    ~~Sweetie