Pills From Satan

by Poetic Tragedy08   Dec 18, 2005


*Note* I wrote this A long time ago (dated June 2004) when I broke up with my first girlfriend, so this isn't how I feel today.

The bottle sits unused and already open
My hand trembles as pill by pill...I forget
Your smiles fade and so does my pain
Tonight and forever...no more regret

Lower then piss, I've never felt like this
I won't let these tears control me
I want to let go, so I f**king give up
Bleed baby bleed, I don't want to see

The words that you slowly whispered
"You're no longer my friend..."
Violation of the skin to bone, let me die
Forget me and don't remember this trend

I'm sick of standing by to want you
I'm sick of watching me bleed
With your will to end my life
That's something that you can succeed

Will I ever get the girl? Will I ever love?
Or will you just yell? Will you pray for my death?
I don't care anymore...I'm ready for hell
Heaven seems like hell while hell is my heaven

This cracked body that fails me more every day
How Can I waste time letting you yell
When everyday the gods deceive me with you
I can't let you hurt me in hell

Don't remember my face, or my smile
Don't remember my hated soul of life
So while I let you forget me tonight...
I'll link my heart..with this knife
I'll be forgetting you tonight...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    "Bleed baby bleed" I liked that part. It's a sad poem though, And I'm glad you don't feel like that anymore. =) Keep it up!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I absolutely loved this poem. The title is really catchy & the poem in itself was great.

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Woah, It's been a while since I read your work man =)

    This was excellent, so emotional and strong.. great power went into this like I coudl feel your anger while reading it!

    You really set the atmosphere and sorta made me mad to =P

    Anyhoo this is a great poem, your getting really good man REALLY good, I enjoy your work alot, so much effort put into each stanze I really loved it xD

    Lisa xD

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow... the flow was amazing... the emotion was pure and over all it just took your breath away when you read it... nice job...

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    I don't usually read suicide poems as much as possible because of how it makes me feel... Like how your poem makes me feel about how love can make someone pick up a knife or a pill.. It's kind of sad that love makes you feel this way once.

    Anyway, back to the poem. I do like the emotions you had in these lines and how you describe your state of mind. It helps in bringing out the sorrow and pain. Nice write. =)

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