by Little Dot
Good work, this poem has very good imagery and flow to it. I'm not totally into suicide poems though. |
Wow thats a very powerful poem! glad to hear you don't feel like that any longer... |
by pseudo
WoW... this is certaintly an intense poem.. i love how you write out of your true experiences which is always great to see! |
by Dreams
I don't usually read suicide poems as much as possible because of how it makes me feel... Like how your poem makes me feel about how love can make someone pick up a knife or a pill.. It's kind of sad that love makes you feel this way once. |
by Samantha
Wow... the flow was amazing... the emotion was pure and over all it just took your breath away when you read it... nice job... |
by ASPHYXIATED
Woah, It's been a while since I read your work man =) |
by Bridgette
I absolutely loved this poem. The title is really catchy & the poem in itself was great. |
by Natalie
"Bleed baby bleed" I liked that part. It's a sad poem though, And I'm glad you don't feel like that anymore. =) Keep it up!! 5/5 |