Don't you see

by Becky   Dec 18, 2005


I dunno its really not my best, i wrote it in school i was bored lol

round and round
the world keeps spinning
round and round
i wish i was winning

over and over
the world keeps turning
over and over
i wish i was burning

night to day
i don't seem to fit
night to day
it doesn't matter if I'm in it

birth to death
why does it have to take so long
birth to death
what did i ever do wrong

th earth keeps going
even without me
so its OK if i leave
don't you see

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Nice poem - considering you did it in school when your was bored I think its actually quite brilliant. And it just shows how much potential you have got: well done =)