Great poem!

5/5!!

If you have a chance check out mine sometime.. If you do please comment!!

Thanks, C-ya

-Usher Stiegler

Great poem, it's very descriptive and you have put so much feeling into it. the ending really caught me off-guard, it is almost a 'happy' (for lack of a better word) ending, and it showcases you finding pleasure in the situation, coming off as quite bitter-sweet. Well done :)

That sounded real... ='(

Kayla Cherry Tree... Please never ever ever ever do that! It's not worth it and you've told me this many times before... you've helped me so much and now i'm going to be here to help you all that i can. I love you to death and even though we may have our fights, it works out in the end right? Stay strong hunn in the end you'll be glad that you did. You wont be there forever, you'll get out of there soon dont worry... we're half way through our junior year, one more year left after that...stay strong! Love you to death!! Take care
Jess